Posts tagged yr 5
yr 5 today were lerning about the planets. they learned about the stages of the moon and the position of the planets while mr Martines made an example with a chair, a torch and some balls! after that they made an investigation on why the moons face changes over time.
Yr 5 have been writing about how Britan would have looked 5000 years ago.
They told me that they had to write in first person, as if they had just entered this new found land. They would need to describe what the area around them looks using powerful adjectives and different features of describing.
In year 5 they have been doing time adverbials in their stories and they had to use at least nine and a child said that it helps you in your stories because it tells you when is it
Today, yr 5 have been writing the problem (dilemma) for their story, using time adverbials. The story that they got inspired by was called Cosmic:
They were making sure that all of the adverbials made sense and that they were using a range of adverbials to make the story interesting. Before the dilemma, they had written a build up. Next they will need to write the resolution.
YR 5 Were experimenting with time adverbials so they could write the problem for their space stories
Suddenly, the fire alarm stopped their work!
once they were all inside they began to work again some of the students tried to use time adverbials in the middle of a sentence!
they were magpiing from a book called cosmic with a plot about alians on mars